slumbering on pillows of snow white cottony clouds trees wrapped in emerald kimonos
swaying to the rhythm of gentle breeze
like a maestro caressing a wand on the strings of a violin mellifluous but a wee bit wistful reminiscentive tune the sun is still bright but does not blaze the earth and the nights are enfolded in the charm of a whispering moon with the chariot of stars bejeweled and bright twinkle in pure delight in a sheath of dreams beloved autumn your blossoms are still in bloom my hearth redolent with their fragrance and warmth of your presence soothes the soul into soft awakening you are the threshold to winter's frozen frame of listless monotony of
verses wane away not so soon let the embers of desire die down a little it's glow spread like
a mellowed cocoon of bygone comfort o
beloved autumn dear friend don't desert us
without hope without colours without songs
without the wisp of your mesmerics so soon
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I love this passionate description!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosemary
DeleteWow this is stunning I really enjoyed your poem
ReplyDeleteThank you Maria. Autumn is my favourite season.
DeleteI wish this was formatted. Guess you posted this from your phone.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned thoughts though. Love how you talked about autumn being the festive season in India before the winter season sets in.
Do drop by mine.
Cheers,
CRD
I formatted the way it is like a running versified flow of conversation without a break.
DeleteThis "of verses wane away not so soon let the embers of desire die down a little..." stuck out - a good description of Autumn.
ReplyDeleteThank you Margaret
DeleteBeautifully descriptive. I like Autumn being a maestro playing a wistul tune on the violin.
ReplyDeleteThe wistfulness is an unmistakable part of autumn. Thank you Rall.
DeleteThank you for your comment on my poem. Sorry it got deleted accidentally.
DeleteYou, my friend ... are a poet who understands the power of music, its magic, its sensuality, its nuance. And I love how you wove your words around Autumn.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Helen. You made my day.
DeleteI love your passion for music - lovely, vibrant imagery too - Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Jae
DeleteWhat wonderful word-painting! I enjoyed reading this very much.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much 😊
DeleteA very sensual piece and a nice view of fall in an unfamiliar to me setting.
ReplyDeleteAutumn here is very pleasant though it's hot and humid this time. Climate is changing all over the globe. Thank you Ron
DeleteLinger, October! November comes too soon! (I liked it.)
ReplyDeleteThank you Priscilla. You are so right.
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