tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post7762244487849774266..comments2024-03-26T09:09:27.269-07:00Comments on MINDSPEAK-VANDERLOOST: These Are Difficult Daysvanderloosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-69481585654044615632013-05-22T04:52:02.373-07:002013-05-22T04:52:02.373-07:00Preening.....Preening.....vanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-22953778033336041092013-05-22T03:56:20.127-07:002013-05-22T03:56:20.127-07:00Bengali, Hindi, English ... wow ... you have maste...Bengali, Hindi, English ... wow ... you have mastered it all !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-48696528257127076462013-05-08T17:28:12.673-07:002013-05-08T17:28:12.673-07:00Overwhelmed by your esteemed presence, PanchalidiOverwhelmed by your esteemed presence, Panchalidivanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-4723774344761102592013-05-08T14:32:41.952-07:002013-05-08T14:32:41.952-07:00Geetashree, There is a spare style, a rare lightne...Geetashree, There is a spare style, a rare lightness, a deep perception,a revelation, a feeling of a moment distilled in your writings. loved it unreservedly...Take a bow!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-45640620703783155632013-05-07T08:24:09.708-07:002013-05-07T08:24:09.708-07:00Thanks! ThanksThanks! Thanksvanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-58119113359479310542013-05-07T05:54:41.657-07:002013-05-07T05:54:41.657-07:00nice one nice one The Mukhtiarshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17820859098668959132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-82080949365139554842013-05-06T10:04:23.263-07:002013-05-06T10:04:23.263-07:00Thanks Amit!Thanks Amit!vanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-11811545725660282722013-05-06T10:03:40.849-07:002013-05-06T10:03:40.849-07:00Thank you so much @shooting starThank you so much @shooting starvanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-64886672435485199192013-05-06T10:02:40.837-07:002013-05-06T10:02:40.837-07:00Arti, this is pure telepathy. Only yesterday I was...Arti, this is pure telepathy. Only yesterday I was thinking of visiting your blog. Thanks for remembering me.vanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-17945220612975857422013-05-06T10:01:58.091-07:002013-05-06T10:01:58.091-07:00Thanks RajeshjiThanks Rajeshjivanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-71132583117300641292013-05-06T10:00:50.906-07:002013-05-06T10:00:50.906-07:00Thanks NilanjanaThanks Nilanjanavanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-90466273473434517682013-05-06T10:00:32.451-07:002013-05-06T10:00:32.451-07:00Mathur Sahab, I am rather overwhelmed by the comme...Mathur Sahab, I am rather overwhelmed by the comments (including yours) received on this post. While doing the Hindi version I have taken, what they say, a generous helping of poetic license. The Hindi version is neither a transliteration nor a translation, in the strictest sense of the terms. I have taken the gist, the soul of the English version and dabbled in Hindi. Therefore, if you are looking for exact synonyms you may not find them. Yes, I suppose there may be a few grammatical errors, some are deliberately made, in order to maintain the cadence, the others have been indulgently retained, because while writing the Hindi verse, I was more interested in how it would read aloud than how it would be written. So, I confess I am guilty of molesting the language and misusing the lingual expressions. Do pardon my folly.<br /><br />Sincerely, <br /><br />Geetavanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-9916378275900860502013-05-06T02:53:12.636-07:002013-05-06T02:53:12.636-07:00very nice line....very nice line....Amit Pithadiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18419629890451333739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-47093337439910630712013-05-06T01:29:58.566-07:002013-05-06T01:29:58.566-07:00wonderful words and the image is so apt!!
http://...wonderful words and the image is so apt!!<br /><br />http://www.myunfinishedlife.com/My Unfinished Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17585327291812330305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-72322672745185509202013-05-05T23:51:24.654-07:002013-05-05T23:51:24.654-07:00Loved the Hindi version especially! Very touching....Loved the Hindi version especially! Very touching.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-73830363340650720582013-05-05T21:07:37.811-07:002013-05-05T21:07:37.811-07:00गीता जी,
अंग्रेज़ी की कविता में अभिव्यक्त भावों का...गीता जी,<br /><br />अंग्रेज़ी की कविता में अभिव्यक्त भावों का हिन्दी संस्करण एकदम त्रुटिहीन तो नहीं है लेकिन इस अधूरेपन का भी अपना सौन्दर्य है । और यह सौंदर्य अप्रतिम है, अद्वितीय है । मैंने इस हिन्दी रूप को पढ़ा, फिर पढ़ा, बार-बार पढ़ा और यह पाया कि व्याकरणीय रूप से पूर्णतः शुद्ध न होने के बावजूद जो अनगढ़ भावनाएँ शब्दों में अभिव्यक्त हुई हैं वो कहने वाले के (या कहने वाली के) अकेलेपन की अनुभूति को ऐसी तीव्रता के साथ बिखेरती हैं जैसी तीव्रता के साथ व्याकरणीय रूप से शुद्ध कविता संभवतः नहीं बिखेर पाती । मोनालिसा की तस्वीर में भौहें नहीं है लेकिन शायद इसी अधूरेपन के कारण उसकी मुस्कान सामान्य से अधिक रहस्यमय लगती है और उसके चित्र को अमरत्व प्रदान करती है । यही तथ्य आपकी इस कविता के हिन्दी रूप पर भी लागू है । आपकी कलम से जो शब्द निकले हैं वो मेरे हृदय की गहराई में जाकर कहीं विलीन हो गए हैं । जो अनुभूति शब्दों में निहित है, उसकी सिहरन मैं अपने भीतर अनुभव कर रहा हूँ । इस कविता की प्रशंसा करने का यदि मैं प्रयास करूंगा तो मेरी प्रशंसा भी अधूरी ही रहेगी । बस इतना ही कहूँगा कि इसे मैं चाहे जितनी बार पढ़ लूँ, स्वयं को अतृप्त ही पाऊंगा । <br /><br />सादर,<br /><br />जितेन्द्र माथुर Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-19186149699598972752013-05-05T21:07:22.362-07:002013-05-05T21:07:22.362-07:00गीता जी,
अंग्रेज़ी की कविता में अभिव्यक्त भावों का...गीता जी,<br /><br />अंग्रेज़ी की कविता में अभिव्यक्त भावों का हिन्दी संस्करण एकदम त्रुटिहीन तो नहीं है लेकिन इस अधूरेपन का भी अपना सौन्दर्य है । और यह सौंदर्य अप्रतिम है, अद्वितीय है । मैंने इस हिन्दी रूप को पढ़ा, फिर पढ़ा, बार-बार पढ़ा और यह पाया कि व्याकरणीय रूप से पूर्णतः शुद्ध न होने के बावजूद जो अनगढ़ भावनाएँ शब्दों में अभिव्यक्त हुई हैं वो कहने वाले के (या कहने वाली के) अकेलेपन की अनुभूति को ऐसी तीव्रता के साथ बिखेरती हैं जैसी तीव्रता के साथ व्याकरणीय रूप से शुद्ध कविता संभवतः नहीं बिखेर पाती । मोनालिसा की तस्वीर में भौहें नहीं है लेकिन शायद इसी अधूरेपन के कारण उसकी मुस्कान सामान्य से अधिक रहस्यमय लगती है और उसके चित्र को अमरत्व प्रदान करती है । यही तथ्य आपकी इस कविता के हिन्दी रूप पर भी लागू है । आपकी कलम से जो शब्द निकले हैं वो मेरे हृदय की गहराई में जाकर कहीं विलीन हो गए हैं । जो अनुभूति शब्दों में निहित है, उसकी सिहरन मैं अपने भीतर अनुभव कर रहा हूँ । इस कविता की प्रशंसा करने का यदि मैं प्रयास करूंगा तो मेरी प्रशंसा भी अधूरी ही रहेगी । बस इतना ही कहूँगा कि इसे मैं चाहे जितनी बार पढ़ लूँ, स्वयं को अतृप्त ही पाऊंगा । <br /><br />सादर,<br /><br />जितेन्द्र माथुर Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-55362292410342278882013-05-05T20:36:38.622-07:002013-05-05T20:36:38.622-07:00Powerful expressions and very emotive, the lines t...Powerful expressions and very emotive, the lines touch the heart. How beautiful to read the verse in hindi too. Absolutely lovely! :)Artihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14606566484548310912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-55466850642244309332013-05-05T19:12:38.430-07:002013-05-05T19:12:38.430-07:00Very nice poem.Very nice poem.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325697671806865458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-85013483434169090052013-05-05T16:33:23.446-07:002013-05-05T16:33:23.446-07:00Thank you Nitesh :)Thank you Nitesh :)vanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-38695382339513714752013-05-05T05:30:39.293-07:002013-05-05T05:30:39.293-07:00Thank you so much. I am much indebted by your enco...Thank you so much. I am much indebted by your encouragementvanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-60923039317998409922013-05-05T05:24:46.207-07:002013-05-05T05:24:46.207-07:00great and one of the finest compositions(esp. hind...great and one of the finest compositions(esp. hindi one) i have read.gunjan kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16159408068402907816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-87756776483926706122013-05-05T02:59:01.450-07:002013-05-05T02:59:01.450-07:00Thank you for listening!!!Thank you for listening!!!vanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-81195194367942183012013-05-05T02:19:00.586-07:002013-05-05T02:19:00.586-07:00Very touching !
Thank you for speaking your mind
...Very touching !<br />Thank you for speaking your mind <br />Best regards from a fellow blogger<br />http://lionheartangler.blogspot.in/ Lionhearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12997683051793565432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3562433296072095163.post-33987447480047256342013-05-05T01:09:48.398-07:002013-05-05T01:09:48.398-07:00Thanks Rat!Thanks Rat!vanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.com