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Thursday 6 April 2023

A Tanka

dark clouds
hovering over
my tea cup
I learn to bond
with the trees

 


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20 comments:

  1. Jim7 April 2023 at 03:20

    I like it. A nice 'escape' write, going back to nature.
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    1. vanderloost7 April 2023 at 07:04

      Thanks Jim. It's bonding with nature to get over the absences in one's life. Nature is solace.

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  2. Rosemary Nissen-Wade7 April 2023 at 06:10

    Intriguing!

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  3. vanderloost7 April 2023 at 07:05

    Thanks Rosemary

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  4. magiceye7 April 2023 at 17:57

    Beautiful

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  5. Rajani7 April 2023 at 19:31

    I see a suggestion of solitude that the dark clouds represent...

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    1. vanderloost7 April 2023 at 21:29

      Tanka is open to individual interpretation

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  6. Rommy8 April 2023 at 05:39

    Sounds like a good afternoon to me. I have lovely trees in my backyard and plenty of tea.

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    1. vanderloost8 April 2023 at 07:11

      Even I have. And I also like to watch the sky.

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  7. Helen8 April 2023 at 08:23

    I enjoy reading and writing tanka .... your tanka resonates ....

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  8. vanderloost8 April 2023 at 18:17

    Thanks Helen

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  9. Priscilla King9 April 2023 at 21:05

    Blessed be trees!

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  10. Tomichan Matheikal11 April 2023 at 22:00

    When a storm promises to brew in a tea cup, bonding with the trees is a good idea.

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  11. Arti11 April 2023 at 23:35

    Beautiful.

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  12. rudraprayaga12 April 2023 at 00:02

    An attractive impression on nature.

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