Thursday, 3 December 2015

Dusk (Haiku)




day's end
my mother's vermilion
on the sky



Foot Note : This Haiku was first  posted in Your Space of Muse India ejournal

17 comments:

  1. What a thought! My mother's vermilion! Love the short pangs of haiku, which makes one introspect on the deeper tones!

    Very beautiful, Geetashree!

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    1. Exactly..that's what haiku are all about Rakesh!!

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  2. A delightful piece, well done.

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  3. Lovely comparison of the colour of twilight sky with the colour of vermilion.

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  4. sky like mother's vermilion..powerful image :)

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