Saturday 29 August 2015

Vagrant Shades

Its good that you know me not
Far apart shall echo muted pain
In intimacy, a hesitant blush
Deep, in the rush of spring 
The surge of shades million
Paint the breeze melodious  
Fragrant, the jewels be cherished
In dreams of a perfect mating
Glimpsed have I the  
Tempest reigned in unkempt
Locks, the bohemian jazz of 
Unchecked hush of whispers 
Loud and the unsaid stays 
Embedded in my flute tuned
To sing your songs unwritten yet
Its good that you know me not






(Inspired by this wonderful song by Tagore which can never be told in any other way....)









18 comments:

  1. I haven't heard or read the song by Tagore which inspired this, but am sure your's is not less in any way..the spirit or words or fluidity or truth or pain...I simply loved it!

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  2. This is just so beautiful!!! I loved every bit of this! Thanks you for sharing this piece :)

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  3. Tis beautiful Geetashree :-)

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  4. Beautiful choice of words to echo the sentiment of the song.

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  5. Intriguing as well as touching piece of poetry. Highly sentimental people only can create such things.

    Jitendra Mathur

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    1. Thanks MathurbSahab. I wish you hear the song as well.

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